我寫了一篇作文《〈想家的時候》,結果被他在全班同學面前搖頭晃腦的大讀特讀,還說這就是有真情實感、有新意的佳作,惹來同學羨慕的目光.也不知是哪位同學嫉妒,偷偷地說了一句：“哼!這是抄的!”沒想到這句話溜到了他的耳朵里,他怒目而視,隨口甩出一句：“豈有此理!你給我抄出一篇我看看?”隨即把目光投向我,臉上難看的微笑又來了：“你說說,你是如何寫成這篇作文的.”看了看老師臉上信任的目光和微笑,我心情平靜地把住宿以來想家的感受竹筒倒豆子般說出來.教室里靜極了,同學門靜靜的聽著,老師也好像挺激動,不住點頭,臉上的微笑更燦爛了,那兩顆難看的門牙也不由自主露出了嘴外.我說完了他帶頭給我鼓掌,嘴里不停的說著：“真實感受,有道理!”可以說,從那次以后,我就更愛寫作,更愛上胡哲老師的課了,而他在寫作上對我的指導更用心了.〖307字〗

常用過渡詞語And, But, However, Otherwise, so, and then, After that, Shortly/soon after that, Therefore, Finally, At last, In the end, For that reason, Obviously, (Un)fortunately, (Un)luckily, (Un)happily, Besides, Apart from…, In addition, What’s more, Furthermore, Moreover, To make things worse, What’s worse, Even worse, Generally speaking, Frankly speaking, Personally, In my opinion, Of course, By the way, For instance, For example, such as, and so on, such things like that, To one’s surprise (astonishment, delight, disappointment, regret, joy, comfort), On the other hand, On the contrary, As far as I am concerned （就我而言）As a result, In a word, In 英語寫作中常用過渡詞語,另附有關于環境的一些常用詞〖613字〗

麻煩采納，謝謝!〖6字〗